Category: Writers Block
She sat alone at the bar in her new blue jean and old silver top. The bar light glistening on her blouse. The bar had just handed her, her fifth drink of the evening. Her herself not knowing the reason of her over intoxication, she took a sip of her bitter-sweet margarita.
"Stacey!" A man's voice yellwed accross the over amped bar. "Satcey." the had said in a softer voice as her approached her. "Wow, I never thought I would see you in a place like this. What a shock." He said with an excited smile on his face. He was a tall man about 6'2 with a stalky build and a distinct thin beard. He was a co-worker of Stacey's from the insurance company. She wasn't sure of his department. But equal to his surprise she was not expecting to see anyone from anywhere at this bar.
"Hi, how are you?" She said shyly, she didn't want him picking up the strong aroma of alcohol on her breath.
"Do you even know who I am?" He said knowing she didn't know his name.
"I know you work with me, but I am not sure of your name." She replied honestly.
"Well, its alright, pretty girls like you rarely know my name first, but it's Rick." He moved in a little closer "Would you like a drink?"
"No thank you. I think I am done for this evening." She said knowing her limit was too high for public and even much too high to drive home.
"Oh, don't be modest, my treat. Look, the night is young, you're beautiful and it's the weekend." He smailed and placed his hand on her lower back. "Bartender, get this fine young woman whatever she wants on me."
"Alright then, Bartender I'll have my usual." the bartender handed her another margarita. "Thank you."
"So I never asked you, are you here alone?" Rick asked with a hopeful smile.
"Yes, here drinking away heartache and pain." She joked, at this point looking at Rick she wasn't she what it was but something made her feel un conforatable. "I'm going to use the restroom, can you watch my drink?" She said as she automatically got up.
"Of course, hurry back." Rick shouted as she began to walk away.
Stacey made it in the restroom, washed her face and took a look in the mirror. Her dark brown hair shinning in the over-head lamp. She re applied her lip gloss and adjusted her blouse. She kind of felt like she had an attraction to Rick, but she also was not sure of it being real or a reaction of the alcohol.
She returned out to the bar area to see Rick still sitting at the bar awaiting her arrival. "Hello you." He said with his charming smile.
She sat down and took a few sips of her drink and they talked for a few minutes. Wow, this drink must have had more alcohol in it, because she was feeling this on. She was actually starting to feel kind of dizzy, when she said, "Rick, do you mind if we step outside, I'm not feeling so well."
"Sure" he said his smile growing bigger and bigger as they walked out the bar. His arm around Stacey, she was stumbling around and nearly fell on the bouncer. They made their way to the nearly empty parking lot. Stacey Remembered looking at Rick then closing her eyes to blink. After that pitch black......
i love this. are you going to post anymore of it?. it's 1 of those ones you just can't stop reading.
Okay, I take it this is chapter one. Stacey did one thing I'd never do when going to a bar, leaving her drink unattended. So, now putting things together, he gave her date rape drugs and took advantage of her. Wow! Just to think this happens all the time.
In this story, you do not repeat things at all. Definitely give it a read over and look for mistakes and run through spellcheck. But awesome read! I hope you continue this. I can't wait to read more.
I agree, Dan. I'm addicted to this story and can't wait for more.